Dil karta hai aaj unchi udan bhar loon
Ek pag mein us chand ko chhu loon
Koi bandhan na rok paaye mujhe
Har bandhan mein tod doon
Jeevan ke iss chaurahe par dekha
Har rah par dhund ghanera ( ghanera = dense )
Aur har rah par dikh raha
Us chand ka bimb sunehra (bimb = image )
Kahin hoti vraksh ki chhanv (vraksh = tree )
Kahin hota nikat padav ( padav = place to rest )
Kahin dikhti kareeb uski chhaya
Yunhi dolti rehti mere man ki naav
Kash aaj saath hota tumhara
Dhoondh leta mera man koi kinara ( dhoondh = search )
Chod gaye tum iss vaqt mujhe
Jab chahiye tha koi sahara
Agar tum saath hote mere
Na rehte yeh baadal ghanere
Phir chaand ka bhi kya karna mujhe
Jab saath nahin ho tum mere
Chaand ko pana to ek bahana hai
Tumhari yaadoon ko bhool jana hai
Apne iss sangharsh mein mujhe
Tumhare saath beete har pal ko bhulana hai
Unn palon ka zakhm, ab tak hara hai ( palon = plural of pal )
Inn aankhon ka paani, ab tak nahin thama hai (thamna = to stop )
Til til ke dard dete hain yeh
Tumhare bina mera man, ab bhi adhoora hai
Adhoore hain woh sapne bhi
Jo maine aur tumne sanjoye the kabhi
Dhul jayenge ye
Inn aansuon mein ye sabhi
Tham loonga mein, inn aansuon ko
Chhod doonga peechhe, uss beete hue kal ko
Chal pada hoon mein nayi raahon par
Mita doonga inn saanson se, tumhari mahak ko
Dil kehta hai aaj uunchi udan bhar loon
Ek pag mein uss chand ko choo loon
Tumko naa sahi
Uss chaand ko to apna keh sakoon.
Ek pag mein us chand ko chhu loon
Koi bandhan na rok paaye mujhe
Har bandhan mein tod doon
Jeevan ke iss chaurahe par dekha
Har rah par dhund ghanera ( ghanera = dense )
Aur har rah par dikh raha
Us chand ka bimb sunehra (bimb = image )
Kahin hoti vraksh ki chhanv (vraksh = tree )
Kahin hota nikat padav ( padav = place to rest )
Kahin dikhti kareeb uski chhaya
Yunhi dolti rehti mere man ki naav
Kash aaj saath hota tumhara
Dhoondh leta mera man koi kinara ( dhoondh = search )
Chod gaye tum iss vaqt mujhe
Jab chahiye tha koi sahara
Agar tum saath hote mere
Na rehte yeh baadal ghanere
Phir chaand ka bhi kya karna mujhe
Jab saath nahin ho tum mere
Chaand ko pana to ek bahana hai
Tumhari yaadoon ko bhool jana hai
Apne iss sangharsh mein mujhe
Tumhare saath beete har pal ko bhulana hai
Unn palon ka zakhm, ab tak hara hai ( palon = plural of pal )
Inn aankhon ka paani, ab tak nahin thama hai (thamna = to stop )
Til til ke dard dete hain yeh
Tumhare bina mera man, ab bhi adhoora hai
Adhoore hain woh sapne bhi
Jo maine aur tumne sanjoye the kabhi
Dhul jayenge ye
Inn aansuon mein ye sabhi
Tham loonga mein, inn aansuon ko
Chhod doonga peechhe, uss beete hue kal ko
Chal pada hoon mein nayi raahon par
Mita doonga inn saanson se, tumhari mahak ko
Dil kehta hai aaj uunchi udan bhar loon
Ek pag mein uss chand ko choo loon
Tumko naa sahi
Uss chaand ko to apna keh sakoon.
11 Comments:
goood going dude but is it really abt someone ???
goood going dude but is it really abt someone ???
Well, though I have told this to ya earlier , but let me give it to you in writing..;)
Seems like u r fighting with urself..Hope u win..!
Nice work really..keep goin..
best wishes,
Hemant
thanx hemant
with ppl like u around me
i will loose none
sid i guess
yera roomy rehkak bhi mein tujhe samajh nahin paaya
thats all..........
sid i guess
tera roomy rehkar bhi mein tujhe samajh nahin paaya
thats all..........
CR ke liye try kyun nahin karta?
NICE WORK MAN....
i m really impressed !!!
keep up the good work,
the only suggestion i wd give is that ki thodi HALKI poem likh alar yaar mere jaise aam aadmi ke liye, ye kuch jyaada hi bhaaari hai n
do think on waht hyeman has written .JUST CHILL OUT A BIT!!!
BEST OF LUCK...!!!!!
nice work.
ho sakta hai tumhare aur chand ke beech mein kuch badal aa gaye hai , unhe hata do , tumhara chand tumhe nazar aayega.
all the best.
u need to be very emotional to think things like this.so i guess u r....
i think most of the ppl r, but the difference is, some know how to express themselves, but others don't and I think
I fall in 2nd category.
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